Enclosed is a one pager of our hosting environment. Very wordy... I can't draw, so not even going to try... hopefully if you know some general technical stuff, you'll know what this is going on about
But want an equivalent one pager that is very slick, visual and professional and basically blows people away... somehow I guess some of the words on this diagram will still have to make it onto this new version too I guess.
Don't want something that looks too much like what you can do in visio... Really aiming for a level or two above that. Going to be used mainly to add into proposals, and when a customer's IT wants to be reassured on our hosting environment. We might also end up using in our website at some point (our website is undergoing redevelopment, so what you see up there now is about 4 years old)
Quite like 'sketchy' styles, including what say dropbox do as an example... something a little informal, but still acceptable to corporates... having said that, a very slick corporate style might work too